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MBA Personal Statement/Essay Round-by-Round Review

Ashish D.
By Ashish D.5.0· 5 reviewsUPenn Wharton JD/MBA | McKinsey SBA | UT Austin Grad

Your personal statement is the narrative that ties together your whole law school application. With this package, get help from an experienced coach to craft a unique, personal, and compelling personal statement that will wow admissions committees. This package includes the following: 1. 45 Minute Initial Kickoff and Planning Session (required): begin with an in-depth kickoff session to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session gives me background on your story and sets the foundation for creating a powerful personal statement. 2. Round-by-Round Engagement (1 minimum, additional as desired): depending on where you are in the drafting process (e.g., starting from scratch vs starting from a rough draft), I will provide the next round of edits/feedback to get you to your desired level. Support can range from targeted edits to broad thematical feedback/recommendations to help your essay progress and will differ based on essay maturity (e.g., for essays at brainstorming stage, feedback may consist of broad ideas to consider, pros/cons of each option, and broad outlines for each option; for essays at maturity, feedback may consist of targeted language and structural improvements).

What's included

5h 15m of coaching$90.29/hr · Live Sessions$474
Total$474
  • Meaningful progress towards the next level of your statement/essay from someone who recently went through the process

Meet your expert

Ashish D.

Ashish D.

UPenn Wharton JD/MBA | McKinsey SBA | UT Austin Grad

5.05 reviews
45Min coached
5Followers

Hello! My name is Ashish, it's great to meet you. I believe that mentorship and coaching—helping others become the best versions of themselves in pursuit of their personal dreams—is one of life's greatest honors. Here's why you should work with me: ✅Coached 30+ candidates in behavioral interviews, case interviews, and resume reviews for a variety of career milestones, including professional corporate roles and university programs ✅Strategy consulting experience at McKinsey & Company ✅Current JD/MBA candidate at UPenn Wharton and Carey Law ✅Past experience as a startup co-founder/CEO, summer roles with Goldman Sachs and Boeing

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