MBA Essay Package — Build Compelling Narratives That Win
This package is designed for applicants who want deep support specifically on their essays — from brainstorming to final polish. Together, we’ll focus on developing authentic, differentiated, and powerful narratives that highlight your strengths and align with each school’s expectations. Here’s how we’ll work together: 1. Kickoff Strategy Session (60 - 90 minutes) - We’ll start with a deep-dive session to uncover your stories, map out themes, and align on the right strategy for your essays across schools. 2. Essay Brainstorming & Narrative Development - We’ll explore your experiences, goals, and personal voice to identify the strongest material and craft narratives that stand out. 3. Unlimited Essay Reviews (Async) - You’ll have unlimited written feedback on your drafts. I’ll review your essays carefully, provide detailed comments, and guide revisions until we’re both confident in the final product. 4. Live Touchpoints (as needed) - We’ll add live calls when real-time collaboration is helpful — for example, when you’re stuck, facing a tight deadline, or preparing a final polish. - We’ll keep the process efficient and structured. Most drafts flow best with 4-5 review cycles per essay, though unlimited async feedback means I’ll never leave you hanging. - Live sessions are flexible but designed to complement async reviews — not replace them. This ensures we stay productive while respecting both our time. - My goal is to push you toward clarity, authenticity, and impact — not just “wordsmithing.” We’ll focus on the bigger picture and the details that make your story shine.
What's included
- A clear essay strategy tailored to your goals and schools
- Essays that highlight your unique voice and points of differentiation
- Iterative feedback that ensures every draft gets sharper and more compelling
- Final essays you feel proud of — authentic, polished, and admissions-ready
Meet your expert
Claire R.
GSB & M7 Expert | Knight-Hennessy | Ex-Bain/Nike | 100+ M7 Admits
I know what it's like to feel like you don't belong. Growing up in the suburbs of Chicago with a mixed-race/cultural family, I never thought that I'd have the chance to be a part of incredible institutions like Dartmouth, Stanford GSB, and the Knight-Hennessy community. I was only able to get there because others invested in me - and now I want to do my part to give back. Before I got to college, I didn't know anybody who went into consulting (or even what McKinsey, Bain, or the Boston Consulting Group were.) My jobs going into college included working as a Starbucks barista and selling equipment at an outdoor goods store. I threw myself into mastering the case interview process and was lucky enough to earn a full-time role at Bain & Company. I then entered the private equity and venture capital industries and have been able to transform the trajectory of my life as well as my family's. My journey has been special, but not because I am. It's because I received mentorship, coaching, and advice from others who believed in me. Now, I'm on Leland to be that person for you. Looking forward to talking about how we can help you pursue your dreams on an intro call soon!
