Essay Writing Strategy and Editing
Be prepared with a draft of your personal statement and activity descriptions. In our first 30-minute meeting, we will discuss your specific concerns about your essays and determine where I should focus my edits. I will edit your essays for up to 1 week. In our second 1-hour meeting, I will summarize my detailed comments and edits and further discuss strategies for strengthening your essays.
What's included
Meet your expert
Avery W.
Student @ Top 5 Medical School with Admissions Committee Experience
I am a 2026 graduate of the University of California San Francisco (UCSF) School of Medicine, passionate about mentoring premed students and guiding them through the medical school application process. I graduated summa cum laude from UNC Chapel Hill and matriculated directly into medical school, giving me firsthand insight into what it takes to craft a competitive application. With an up-to-date perspective on MCAT preparation, personal statement writing, and strategically positioning experiences to highlight key applicant qualities, I help students maximize their strengths and stand out to admissions committees. Additionally, my experience as an admissions interviewer for the UCSF School of Medicine Class of 2028 and 2030 has provided me with valuable insight into how top medical schools evaluate candidates. My goal is to equip aspiring physicians with the knowledge and confidence to achieve their medical school dreams
