Resume Review & Rewrite Feedback (Async)
A deep, line-by-line review of your resume — the same lens I use as a hiring leader and Kellogg admissions interviewer, applied to your actual document. You'll send me your current resume plus 2-3 sentences on your goal (target PM role, promotion, or MBA programs). I'll then spend a dedicated hour reviewing and marking it up, covering: 1. Positioning: Does your resume tell the right story for your specific target? PM resumes, promotion cases, and MBA applications are read differently — I'll tailor feedback to yours. 2. Impact: Rewriting weak bullets to lead with outcomes, with specific before/after examples so you can apply the pattern everywhere. 3. Signal vs. noise: What to cut, what to expand, and what's missing that reviewers expect to see. 4. Formatting and scannability: The 6-second first pass is real. I'll flag anything that costs you attention.
What's included
Direct and specific. You won't get "looks good, maybe add metrics" — you'll get exact rewrites, honest calls on what's not working, and the reasoning behind each change so you can keep improving it yourself. I've reviewed resumes as a hiring manager at companies like Block and Intuit and as an MBA admissions interviewer, so feedback reflects how your document actually gets read on the other side.
- Detailed in-line comments and suggested rewrites in a shared doc
- 2-3 rewritten example bullets showing exactly how to transform your strongest experiences
- A prioritized summary: the top changes to make, in order of impact
- A clear verdict on readiness — whether your resume is ready to submit or needs another pass, and for what
Meet your expert
David R.
Land AI PM Roles & Get Promoted | Ex-Block, Intuit, LinkedIn, GrubHub