Crafting the Essay - Mastering Your Personal, Unique Story
Ace your essay with this 3 session package! Great personal essays are all about translating your CHARACTER. Admissions officers seek candidates who demonstrate leadership potential and a track record of making a meaningful impact. Our coaching session provides strategies for effectively showcasing leadership experiences, achievements, goals, and contributions in a concise and compelling manner. With this package, learn how to identify your motivations, develop a strong motif, and underscore your personal accomplishments. Session 1: Crating the Outline, Identifying Your Motif We begin by delving into the purpose of the MBA essay and its significance in the admissions process. Gain clarity on what admissions committees are looking for and how the essay fits into the overall application package. Session 2: First Draft Review & Edits Revision is an integral part of the writing process. Receive constructive feedback on their draft essays, identify areas for improvement, and refine their narratives to ensure they are polished and impactful. Session 3: Final Draft Review & Edits Final review!
What's included
If you're looking for someone hands-on, warm, and direct, I'm your person. We'll work collaboratively on the live line and asynchronously to make your essay great!
- An outline, framework, and strong motif for your Personal Essay
- 2 distinct opportunities for direct and specific commentary, improvements, and edits
- The ability to showcase your leadership skills & impact
- The ability to articulate your career goals clearly and concisely
Meet your expert

Maya B.
Non-Trad HBS Grad! | Aspiring Startup Founder? Let's Ace Your MBA App!
Hi there! I'm Maya, your friendly neighborhood MBA coach with a passion for entrepreneurship and helping others reach their goals. 🚀 With a background in finance, tech, and entrepreneurship, I've got quite knack for storytelling! As a recent grad from Harvard Business School (go class of 2023!) I am still super connected to the application process and the admissions journey! If you're looking for a coach who will be hands on, giving you insight into whether or not you should pursue an MBA, where to put your focus, & how to craft your application package, you've come to the right place! After founding 2 startups (1 venture backed), I realized the power of an MBA in shaping your future. Now, I'm here to share my insights, tricks of the trade, and a sprinkle of encouragement to guide you through the rollercoaster ride of MBA applications, especially if you're dreaming of carving your own path in the world of entrepreneurship. I love working with non-traditional candidates so if you've got a background that seems out of the ordinary, don't hesitate to reach out! Whether you're brainstorming ideas, drafting essays, or just need a pep talk, I've got your back! Let's turn your dreams into reality, one application at a time. 🌟 Ready to dive in and make your mark? Let's do this!