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MBA Application: Essay Editing and Review - Polish and Perfect

London L.
By London L.5.0· 30 reviewsColumbia MBA | Consortium | Former Consultant

What’s Included: 1. Initial Consultation Session (30 minutes): A dedicated call to review your background, career goals, and draft essays. We’ll align your key messages and ensure your essays are on the right track. 2. Two Rounds of Asynchronous Reviews: Receive detailed, personalized feedback on grammar, punctuation, structure, clarity, and alignment with school values. Suggestions will focus on improving your narrative flow, highlighting your unique voice, and ensuring your essays are error-free and compelling. 3. Flexibility for Additional Reviews: I'm committed to your success — and I’m happy to be flexible with quick check-ins or extra support where needed. Why Choose This Package? Perfect for those who have already started their essays, this package focuses on polishing your content while ensuring flawless grammar, punctuation, and structure. It helps refine your narrative to showcase your strengths effectively. For full end-to-end support, including brainstorming, check out MBA Application: Essay Brainstorming & Editing pacakage.

What's included

3h of coaching$125/hr · Live Sessions$375
Total$375
  • Comprehensive insights to enhance structure, grammar, and impact with each revision.
  • Specific guidance to enhance clarity, coherence, and impact.
  • Submission-ready essays aligned with their goals and the values of their target MBA programs.

Meet your expert

London L.

London L.

Columbia MBA | Consortium | Former Consultant

5.030 reviews
8.6kMin coached
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Hi, I’m London! I'm originally from Detroit. I went to the University of Michigan for undergrad, and began my career in consulting at Accenture. My passion for technology and desire to pivot into the tech industry led me to pursue an MBA. I’m a graduate of Columbia Business School and am currently working in tech. Outside the classroom, I volunteered with The Consortium and MLT and served as a Hermes Admissions Fellow. The application process was incredibly rewarding but required a lot of introspection and hard work. Having benefited from others' support along the way, I’m committed to paying it forward and helping future applicants unlock similar opportunities. During my application journey, I applied to five schools (Wharton, CBS, Yale SOM, NYU, and UCLA) and was grateful to be accepted into all with scholarships - three of which were full rides. I’m passionate about guiding others through the admissions process and empowering them to achieve their goals.

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