MBA Essay Review
This package includes a detailed essay review and iterative feedback for one MBA admissions essay. I applied and earned acceptance to GSB, HBS, Sloan, Booth, and Kellogg MBA programs, which gave me rich insight into various school applications and essay types. I have a 48-hour promise time for all asynchronous feedback! How it works: 1. We have a 30-minute session to discuss your overall application strategy, background, interests, and MBA throughline. 2. I review your essay draft and add detailed suggested edits and feedback tailored to your strategy and school. I will also provide an overarching analysis of your essay. 3. You implement feedback and ask any questions about the feedback I have left. We will go back and forth until you are happy with your final draft!
What's included
- One finished MBA essay
- Hear how your essay reads from an outside perspective
- Grammar and word count check for your essay
- Detailed and personalized essay feedback (unlimited!)
Meet your expert

Amanda T.
GSB & HBS Admit | Deferred MBA Coach
Hi, I’m Amanda! My passion for expanding education access led me to my early career in entrepreneurship and product management, where I’ve dedicated myself to unlocking opportunities for others. I recently applied to business school through the deferred MBA application cycle, ultimately choosing Stanford GSB as my future school. As a former applicant from a non-target school (U. of Arkansas) with a diverse background in startups, academic research, and corporate product management, I know how to thread unique experiences together into a compelling narrative. I’d love to help you do the same. Book a free 15-minute intro call, and let’s kickstart your deferred MBA journey!