Final College Personal Statement Review
This plan is designed to provide a final, expert review of your college personal statement, ensuring it is polished, impactful, and ready to impress admissions committees. With my extensive background in storytelling and education, including experience interviewing and evaluating candidates for Stanford University, I bring a unique perspective to the art of crafting compelling narratives. As an Educational Advisor at Aces College Essay Coaching, I specialize in helping students create unforgettable college application packages. Here's what you can expect from our collaboration: Comprehensive Essay Review: I will meticulously review your personal statement, focusing on clarity, coherence, and the strength of your narrative. My goal is to ensure your essay not only tells your story but does so in a way that resonates with admissions officers. Detailed Editing: From grammar and syntax to style and tone, I will provide detailed edits to refine your essay. We’ll work together to ensure every word serves a purpose and contributes to a cohesive and compelling narrative. Strategic Feedback: I’ll offer strategic insights on how to enhance your essay’s impact, drawing on my experience in storytelling and education. We’ll ensure your personal statement highlights your unique strengths and aligns with your overall application strategy. Throughout this process, I am here to support you as a partner in your college admissions journey. My aim is to help you present the best version of yourself, with a personal statement that stands out in a competitive field. Let’s work together to make your personal statement shine and open the doors to your dream college.
What's included
- Comprehensive narrative review ensuring clarity, coherence, and impact.
- Detailed edits refining grammar, syntax, style, and tone.
- Personalized feedback highlighting unique strengths and storytelling.
- Expertly polished personal statement ready to impress admissions committees.
Meet your expert
Lisa T.
Stanford Alum, Former Interviewer | College Essay Expert | 50+ Ivy+ Accepts
Hi, I’m Lisa! And I am a storyteller who provides independent strategy, solutions, and coaching for students, entrepreneurs, and startups so they can reach their goals. I believe deeply that authentic storytelling combined with thoughtful strategy and excellence in execution leads to amazing outcomes! I received my undergraduate degrees in Quantitative Economics and English from Stanford, my J.D. from Columbia Law School, and my MBA from the University of Southern California (USC). During a long career in finance on Wall Street, I became passionate about helping founders bridge the gaps needed to get their innovative ventures off the ground. I started mentoring and coaching startups with a number of organizations that including Techstars, CTIP and the Greif Center at USC. For seven years, I ran the coaching program at Women Founders Network, an accelerator that connects women building high-growth businesses with the tools and resources they need to achieve business success. Since 2013, WFN alumnae have raised over $100 million in funding. If I look familiar, it may be because I speak regularly on issues related to startups, tech and women in business and have appeared in publications including The Huffington Post, Entrepreneur.com, Inc.com, Fortune, CNBC, StartupNation, Women 2.0, and GenHERation. Whether you are a startup on the track for traditional venture-capital financing or a student crafting a compelling application for their dream school, I can collaborate with you to develop and implement a creative and practical strategy for success!
