College Essay Review: UVU + Free BYU
A focused package for applicants who have already drafted their essays and want thoughtful review, editing, and revision support before submission. This package is designed to strengthen clarity, structure, tone, authenticity, and overall impact while preserving the applicant’s own voice. Includes an initial meeting to discuss the applicant’s goals, application context, and essay direction, followed by review of the submitted drafts and two rounds of edits per essay.
What's included
- A stronger, more polished set of essays
- Specific feedback on clarity, structure, tone, and impact
- Edits that preserve the applicant’s own voice
- Improved organization and flow within each essay
- Stronger alignment between essays and application goals
- Two rounds of revisions per essay
- Final reviewed essays ready for applicant approval
Meet your expert
Liz C.
College Essay Expert | Brigham Young University (BYU) Coach
Hi, I’m Liz! I’m a BYU alum, coach, strategist, and storyteller who helps applicants present themselves clearly and competitively for BYU, graduate school, nursing programs, and other selective opportunities. Much of my coaching has focused on BYU applicants, including my own children, nieces and nephews, family friends, and students preparing for a competitive admissions process. As a BYU graduate and parent of BYU students, I understand the culture, values, and expectations that shape a strong BYU application. In my professional work in innovation at the VA, I teach national courses on storytelling and pitching and coach employees on how to communicate their ideas, experiences, and impact to different audiences. I bring that same strategic approach to application coaching, helping students identify their strengths, clarify their goals, and tell their story with authenticity and confidence. My background also includes nursing, healthcare leadership, a Duke MBA, published writing, international work, and experience with both high school and college students. I am also pursuing professional coach training through the International Coaching Federation, which strengthens my approach to helping clients reflect, clarify goals, and move forward with confidence. I especially enjoy working with nontraditional and underdog applicants who have meaningful stories to tell, even if their path has not been perfectly linear. My coaching style is personal, strategic, and direct, with a focus on helping applicants understand their own story, communicate it well, and take the next step toward the future they want.
