Final R2 Essay Fix Sprint: Improve Your Story With AI Without Starting Over
2.5 hours total support, all-inclusive Pre-session review of your essay drafts to identify key issues 60-minute live 1:1 working session focused on: *Fixing structure, flow, and clarity *Strengthening your core story and positioning *Identifying what to cut, reframe, or emphasize *AI-guided diagnostics and prompts to help you revise more efficiently (ethical, admissions-safe use) Post-session review of revised essays, after you make changes: *Targeted feedback to confirm issues are resolved *Final refinement guidance for submission readiness
What's included
I work with clients in a focused, practical way, especially when deadlines are close. I review materials in advance so our live session is spent making clear decisions about structure, story, and positioning. We may use AI as a thought partner to spot gaps, test clarity, or pressure-check your narrative, making sure that the work stays grounded in your experience and voice. After the session, I review revised drafts to make sure the changes are working and guide final refinements. My goal is to help you submit clear, confident applications without unnecessary rewrites or overthinking.
- A clear diagnosis of what’s not working in your current MBA essay drafts
- Stronger structure, clarity, and narrative flow across essays
- Clear guidance on what to cut, reframe, or emphasize
Meet your expert
Breanne W.
Wharton MBA | Expert Coach for Nontraditional MBA Applicants
I'm an AI coach who helps professionals integrate AI into their daily work to save hours each week, produce better results, and accelerate their careers. I specialize in teaching people how to use AI strategically—not just the tools, but how to think differently about their work. My clients learn to automate repetitive tasks, elevate their communication and reporting, build smarter workflows, and showcase AI-driven impact in resumes, performance reviews, and promotion conversations. The focus is always practical: you leave our sessions with systems you can implement immediately. My approach comes from more than a decade in consulting, government, and international development, plus an MBA from Wharton. I've spent years building complex partnerships and solving operational challenges, and now I teach professionals how to use AI to do the same work faster and better. I make AI accessible, actionable, and directly tied to career growth. I work best with people who are ready to move from AI-curious to AI-confident. My coaching is hands-on, conversational, and results-focused. When I'm not coaching, you'll find me rock climbing, mountain biking, or planning my next weekend in the mountains.
